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Dreams of other worlds
11 June 2008 @ 09:50 pm
The middle third. This time I think I found a place to stop with suitable tension.
Edit: This is the revised version. The changes are relatively minor and no doubt have not addressed all the issues people raised, but it's a bit closer to how I had wanted it to begin with.
Edit: This is the revised version. The changes are relatively minor and no doubt have not addressed all the issues people raised, but it's a bit closer to how I had wanted it to begin with.
Current Mood:
anxious
11 June 2008 @ 03:07 am
